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Your ideas do pose a bunch of questions:
- Why does Jack want to find Davy Jones? His ship hasn't been sunk by Lord Cutlet Beckett yet. He doesn't even HAVE his ship yet. What I understood from the movies is that Cutler Beckett asked Jack to do something he didn't want to. Transport slaves from Africa to the Caribbean, if I am correct. This is not mentioned in the film, but IS found somewhere on the DMC website in a game or something. In any case: Jack doesn't want to and Beckett burns his ship, the <i>Wicked Wench</i>. Jack then makes his deal with Davy to raise the ship from the bottom of the sea.
- What does Beckett want with Will Turner? We are currently over ten years before the events of CotBP, so Will is only a little kid, perhaps even still a baby. If we try to remain more-or-less true to the films' timeline, that is. We can, of course, decide to forget about the film's timeline and just make up a new story with the same characters.
- Why is Tia Dalma living so near to a pirate village? In DMC she was living far in the jungles.
I do not want to critize your work or anything, but it seems to me that what you're suggesting is adding a new film quest, intertwined with the current main quest instead of rewriting the current main quest as was my original idea. You ideas are definitly not bad ideas at all, they are just not what I personally had in mind. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/oops3.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="ops2" border="0" alt="oops3.gif" />
This is the film's backstory as I understand it:
Jack Sparrow is a captain in the employ of Cutler Beckett's East India Trading Company (note: Beckett is NOT a Lord yet). At one point in time, Beckett asks Jack to transport slaves from Africa to the Caribbean. Jack refuses. Perhaps Jack did sail to Africa, but instead of delivering the slaves to Beckett, he freed them. I personally like to think Tia Dalma was either amongst these slaves or at least had some part in this or knew about it. This is because of the number of African people who are always seen around Tia Dalma's swamp hut. In any case: Cutler Beckett was not pleased and he branded Jack a pirate and burned his ship, the <i>Wicked Wench</i>. Jack then makes his deal with Davy Jones to raise his ship from the depths. Davy does this in return for Jack's promise that he will join Davy's crew after 13 years of captaining his newly renamed <i>Black Pearl</i>. At some point in time, Jack "barters" his compass from Tia Dalma. If my above assumption is correct, Tia might have given the compass to Jack in thanks of his help with freeing the slaves. Jack goes to Tortuga and hires a crew, including First Mate Barbossa. Together they go to Isla de Muerte, but Jack is mutinied upon. The Pearl's new crew is cursed and after a while they start searching for the gold coins they spent. During this search, they encounter the <i>HMS Dauntless</i> with onboard the young Will Turner and Elizabeth Swann, along with Governor Weatherby Swann of Port Royal, Lieutenant James Norrington and Mr. Gibbs who is still in the employ of the Royal Navy. Somewhere during the ten years between these events and the setting of the first film (NOT counting the opening prologue), Mr. Gibbs leaves the Royal Navy and gets to know Jack. After this, the events of the films take place, so I don't need to describe these anymore.
If possible, I would like our quest rewrite to be as true as possible to this. So basically we would need to come up with a story that includes all of the above events, but also all events, or at least similar events, to the ones in our current main quest. Preferrably even in the same order. And if possible I would like to change some of the current main quest events into the events of the films' backstory. An example would be replacing the Douwesen storm sequence with Jack losing his ship. Reason: The player loses his ship here, is washed ashore and meets with a more-or-less random character there. The player gets his ship back again later. Now if we make it so that the player loses his ship because of Beckett sinking her (instead of the storm), then meeting Davy Jones ashore, that is basically the same event, but now according to the film's backstory instead. When the player then gets to Isla Muelle, it will not be his original ship there anymore, but the Black Pearl instead.
If we manage to do this properly, we can show how Jack became a pirate and which events led up to the films without actually doing all that much coding work.
Your ideas do pose a bunch of questions:
- Why does Jack want to find Davy Jones? His ship hasn't been sunk by Lord Cutlet Beckett yet. He doesn't even HAVE his ship yet. What I understood from the movies is that Cutler Beckett asked Jack to do something he didn't want to. Transport slaves from Africa to the Caribbean, if I am correct. This is not mentioned in the film, but IS found somewhere on the DMC website in a game or something. In any case: Jack doesn't want to and Beckett burns his ship, the <i>Wicked Wench</i>. Jack then makes his deal with Davy to raise the ship from the bottom of the sea.
- What does Beckett want with Will Turner? We are currently over ten years before the events of CotBP, so Will is only a little kid, perhaps even still a baby. If we try to remain more-or-less true to the films' timeline, that is. We can, of course, decide to forget about the film's timeline and just make up a new story with the same characters.
- Why is Tia Dalma living so near to a pirate village? In DMC she was living far in the jungles.
I do not want to critize your work or anything, but it seems to me that what you're suggesting is adding a new film quest, intertwined with the current main quest instead of rewriting the current main quest as was my original idea. You ideas are definitly not bad ideas at all, they are just not what I personally had in mind. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/oops3.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="ops2" border="0" alt="oops3.gif" />
This is the film's backstory as I understand it:
Jack Sparrow is a captain in the employ of Cutler Beckett's East India Trading Company (note: Beckett is NOT a Lord yet). At one point in time, Beckett asks Jack to transport slaves from Africa to the Caribbean. Jack refuses. Perhaps Jack did sail to Africa, but instead of delivering the slaves to Beckett, he freed them. I personally like to think Tia Dalma was either amongst these slaves or at least had some part in this or knew about it. This is because of the number of African people who are always seen around Tia Dalma's swamp hut. In any case: Cutler Beckett was not pleased and he branded Jack a pirate and burned his ship, the <i>Wicked Wench</i>. Jack then makes his deal with Davy Jones to raise his ship from the depths. Davy does this in return for Jack's promise that he will join Davy's crew after 13 years of captaining his newly renamed <i>Black Pearl</i>. At some point in time, Jack "barters" his compass from Tia Dalma. If my above assumption is correct, Tia might have given the compass to Jack in thanks of his help with freeing the slaves. Jack goes to Tortuga and hires a crew, including First Mate Barbossa. Together they go to Isla de Muerte, but Jack is mutinied upon. The Pearl's new crew is cursed and after a while they start searching for the gold coins they spent. During this search, they encounter the <i>HMS Dauntless</i> with onboard the young Will Turner and Elizabeth Swann, along with Governor Weatherby Swann of Port Royal, Lieutenant James Norrington and Mr. Gibbs who is still in the employ of the Royal Navy. Somewhere during the ten years between these events and the setting of the first film (NOT counting the opening prologue), Mr. Gibbs leaves the Royal Navy and gets to know Jack. After this, the events of the films take place, so I don't need to describe these anymore.
If possible, I would like our quest rewrite to be as true as possible to this. So basically we would need to come up with a story that includes all of the above events, but also all events, or at least similar events, to the ones in our current main quest. Preferrably even in the same order. And if possible I would like to change some of the current main quest events into the events of the films' backstory. An example would be replacing the Douwesen storm sequence with Jack losing his ship. Reason: The player loses his ship here, is washed ashore and meets with a more-or-less random character there. The player gets his ship back again later. Now if we make it so that the player loses his ship because of Beckett sinking her (instead of the storm), then meeting Davy Jones ashore, that is basically the same event, but now according to the film's backstory instead. When the player then gets to Isla Muelle, it will not be his original ship there anymore, but the Black Pearl instead.
If we manage to do this properly, we can show how Jack became a pirate and which events led up to the films without actually doing all that much coding work.