Pirates of the Caribbean: Community Prequel Script

[jacarutu]

Gentlemen and officers,

Been away a while and was confused when I came back.

IMHO - as an Englishman, i can say that there is no way that Mercers family can have had valuable heirlooms stolen as they would simply not have had any.

He is from a working class backround in Northern England and would not have been accepted into the aristocratic class except perhaps as a servant.

He has clearly had military training and is not a sailor, he must therefore have been a Marine.

As a Marine he would have been at sea either with the Navy or with the EITC. To give his character some depth, I can see him up in the rigging with a musket, firing at an attacking pirate ship when the mast is shredded and he is tossed into the sea. Clinging to debris he watches helplessly as the ship is destroyed and his comrades are killed. He sees the Pirate Captain sail away and memorises his face and the ships name.

Some days later, having been desperately hanging on to a piece of flotsum, he sees a ship approach and is rescued by a smart young EITC captain (Beckett) to whom he pledges his alliegence. The loyalty is rewarded when some time later Beckett makes enquiries about the name of the captain of the Pirate ship (Sparrow) and tells Mercer that he will help him to avenge his fallen colleagues.

Mercer now has a mortal dread of dying at sea and also a hatred of the Black Flag and all who fly it.

We know that Mercer is not successful at killing Teague over the following years, so the level of frustration builds and builds. When Beckett asks Mercer to sail with Captain Sparrow on a special mission, he thinks it is Teague. He would be suprised then to meet Jack on the dock in London and note that it is not the man he saw on the ship all those years earlier. We could add to the scene in the office.

Beckett standing in the window watches Jack walk across the dock towards the moorings. He turns his head and speaks over his shoulder
"Is it him?"

Mercer appears beside him and follows his gaze to the departing back of Jack.
"No sir, he's a look about him, but no Sir, he is far to young"

Beckett "As I thought, Like father like son Mr Mercer...Like Father like Son"

Mercer stares at Beckett "His Father Sir..." He looks back at Jack and his jaw clenches.

Beckett "Oh did I not tell you about the father? How careless of me. Sparrow is a very interesting character Mr Mercer with a very interesting pedigree. You two should have lots to talk about on your voyage".

Mercer " His Father was a Pirate?"

Beckett "His Father was many things Mr Mercer, but he raised the Black Flag whilst in the service of the Crown....You will keep an eye on our Mr Sparrow, he may lead you where you want to go"

Mercer "He may lead me to his father?"

Beckett "Perhaps, but your mission for me has absolute priority Mr Mercer...Do I make myself clear?"

Mercer "Yes Sir, of course."

Beckett "Once it is over, you may do with him as you will." Beckett looks directly into Mercers eyes as he speaks and then turns back to the window "You are dismissed Mr Mercer."

Mercer bows his headn and turns to leave the room.

 

[Old Salt]

Welcome back, jacarutu, good to have your input again. BTW, this is brilliant. I love it. I'm all for incorporating this take into the script. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/me.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="me.gif" />

 

[DAS123]

I do not agree. I think that Mercer was at an early age part of the aristocracy. Then when his family was killed and his home ravaged he became a common man. I see it this way, and while i do see where you are coming from Jacarutu, I must disagree. I think that there are many priceless heirlooms that Teague may have taken them, and Mercer now has a grudge.


Another little scene idea with Beckett and Mercer:

Mercer sits in a chair, relaxed, toying with an ivory hilted dagger. Beckett signed papers in the warmly lit room of an English night. Beckett looked up at Mercer as he toyed with the dagger.

"Shame, it is sad that others take that which is not theirs,"

"I cannot condone their ignorance or stupidity, but I also cannot forgive their final actions,"

"I could see to it that replicas be made in their place,"

"I am not worried about the items themselves, but rather the ACT of taking them,"

"I cannot blame you, but you musn't let this get in the way of our overall mission,"

"Of course not, sir,"

Beckett paused...

"Do you recall...in the cabin of the Wench a certain item hung over the port side windows?"

"No, sir. I must say I have failed to notice,"

"There is a sword, obviously decorative, that has a hilt of ivory with the same carving of a wolf as yours,"

Mercer looked about...

"Captain Sparrow?"

Beckett nodded.

"He is much younger than me, it is not possible,"

"Hmmm....perhaps someone he knows?"

"I don't know of anyone with ties to him. He just sails on his ship, on the dreadful sea,"

"And <i>I</i> wonder why he is always late on his shipments, I think it is more than just his drunkenness. He must be visiting someone,"

Mercer looked over...

"Visiting? A relative?"

"I wouldn't be surprised if on this mission he is very punctual on his objectives. Keep an eye on him, do not lose sight of what the job is, and what must be done to ensure its completion. I hope to see you have your heirlooms restored to you once more,"

Mercer sheathed the knife, put on his hat, and bowed his head...

"Good night, sir,"

Beckett nodded and continued to sign papers...




Hey did you guys know that David Schofield played Senator Falco in Gladiator? And guess what, he was the sinister, evil man who had about the same amount of screen time as Mercer in AWE.

 

[Pieter Boelen]

Good thoughts Jacarutu; I like them. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/w00t.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="w00t.gif" />

I think we should make too much work of this; it's not exactly the main story to be told in the script. I imagine most people would hardly even care about Mercer's past. We just need to gice Mercer a bit more of a personality and a past in order to justify/explain his actions in the film. I don't think we should focus the movie too much on him; it's Jack and Nathaniel who are the main characters. Mercer is the main villain and Beckett is the behind-the-scenes villain.

I think we pretty much established that because of one reason or another, Mercer has a personal score to settle with Jack's father. Any thoughts on how this might actually play out in the film? I don't think it would come to much, really. We can add some hints about it in some dialogs, but nothing more, because this particular storyline would go nowhere in the film, I think. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/icon_confused.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":?" border="0" alt="icon_confused.gif" />

 

[morgan terror]

i like both ideas, but i'd prefer the first. don't really know why, but that one seems a bit more likely to happen.

 

[Old Salt]

True, this particular story line wouldn't go anywhere and we can snip it off at this point because it doesn't need to be more developed then it presently is. It would offer up some rich history though between Mercer and Jack and would fill in Mercer more as a character, which couldn't hurt. There should be some explanation for his surliness toward Jack.
I say we leave it in and when we get further along in the script and it starts to seem irrelevant we can always take it out.

 

[Pieter Boelen]

I think we don't need a whole seperate scene between Beckett and Mercer about Mercer's past. That would make it seem like it's really important. Have you ever heard of "Chekov's Gun"? He said that if you show a gun in a film, it must be fired later. Otherwise don't show it. Of course one can deviate partly from that to confuse the audience and surprise them later on, but I do pretty much agree with the concept.

Personally I do really like Jacarutu's idea; it sounds more plausible to me than to have Mercer once being part of aristocracy. Also it explains Mercer's fear of dying at sea that his AWE death scene hints at. Not to mention it explains Mercer's skill with a gun as opposed to great swordfighting skills. I think Mercer isn't such a great swordsman, but IS a great gunman.

To Morgan Terror: Which "the first" one? The "stolen family heirlooms" or the "Mercer as navy marine" one?

 

[Old Salt]

<!--quoteo(post=241056:date=Feb 25 2008, 05:48 AM:name=Pieter Boelen)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Pieter Boelen @ Feb 25 2008, 05:48 AM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=241056"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->Personally I do really like Jacarutu's idea; it sounds more plausible to me than to have Mercer once being part of aristocracy. Also it explains Mercer's fear of dying at sea that his AWE death scene hints at. Not to mention it explains Mercer's skill with a gun as opposed to great swordfighting skills. I think Mercer isn't such a great swordsman, but IS a great gunman.<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
Sounds like an argument to have it in the script. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/icon_wink.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="icon_wink.gif" /> I really don't see it as that much of a diversion where it has to lead to a set conclusion at some point. Rather it can just be an explanation of the animosity that exists between the two. It would be possible to rework it that way. But if everyone feels its an unnecessary distraction then it could be dropped.

 

[Pieter Boelen]

I think it should be hinted at in the subtext of the dialogs instead of having a scene between Beckett and Mercer about Mercer's past. If anything, I'd rather have some Jack-Mercer dialog about their mutual past than a Becket-Mercer dialog about the same. Reason being that neither Becket nor Mercer are the main character of the movie, so the audience probably wouldn't be particularly interested in a dialog between the two of them, especially if it doesn't relate that much to the story of the film. However, when it's Jack and Mercer talking about this, suddenly it becomes a lot more important. I would imagine there being some hints throughout the first part of the film and then when Jack turns pirate and has Mercer put in the brig, we find out the whole story when Mercer becomes really angry and gives some sort of "like father, like son" speech or so. That's some of my random thoughts anyway. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/dunno.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="dunno.gif" />

 

[jacarutu]

Gentlemen and Officers,

Sorry for the period of absence. I have now left the Armed Forces behind and have been trying to settle into a new job.

I left the idea as a quick scene because I agree that it is a subtext and not part of the main story. It is also left open for discource between Jack and Mercer on the voyage and may be used to explain the attitude of Mercer toward Jack.

Mercer, I know you have a firm view on this, but please trust me, it is not possible to change class within english society. The accent of aristocrats is unique and marks them apart from the rest of us. It was even more prevelent in historical times. Compare Prince Philip's accent to Mercer. To be an Officer one would have to have come from the upper class, attended the right schools and have bought your commission.

Even if you fall from grace and become a pauper, you will still be marked as an aristocrat because of the way you speak. The class barrier would still exist.

Mercer would never be from aristocratic stock, he is far too common.

The Commodore may be able to explain with more eloquency than myself, but I am sure that his stories on Norrington, show him to have come from an high class family. Breeding is everything particularly in the Military. Even today, the high ranking officers are all from a certain social sector and are not from working class stock.

Enough said, opinion expressed. Thank you for listening to MHO.

I would like to know more about Nathaniel. He will certainly have come from the right breeding program and may have a family history of naval service.

Perhaps he recognises Mercer from his days in the Navy (I imagine he would have served a commision in the Navy before joining the EITC, you have to qualify as a Captain somewhere), but can not place him clearly. As the voyage progresses, he begins to recall Mercer and his warning to Jack then has a real basis of fact. This also brings him closer to Jack as he begins to realise what Jack is up against.

 

[DAS123]

Jacarutu, i have no doubt that he COULD be a common man by the way he speaks, but maybe being in the lower classes for a while his speech etiquette changed. When i lived in the south of the US for a bit my accent changed from that of my native north, i started to say "y'all" It is DEFINITELY possible to have ones way of speech changed in order to fit in. There is nothing wrong from where i stand. Mercer just changed who he was so he wasn't laughed at and ridiculed for falling from aristocracy. Also he has a Manchester accent, no bearing on his aristocracy. Once more, a year or two in a place with a different accent, you will begin to adopt that just by speaking to people. Also, Mercer's family died when he was VERY young. So from point A to point B he definately could have dropped the pompous aristocratic accent in favor for a more common one. There is a good argument either way.

And it IS possible to change positions in english society, especially if a man as rich as Beckett, with as much influence, could have pulled strings. Compared to other cultures of the time, England had a rather lax social structure. In other words:

No money = no aristocracy.

Mercer had NOTHING but a pistol. Everything was stolen, so no money would mean he would no longer be regarded as an aristocrat.

Also Jacarutu, Prince Phillip is ROYALTY, not Aristocracy. If Mercer was royalty i could understand why he couldnt change places, but he is not.

 

[DAS123]

Well, good news. Its finally the weekend, and i can devote more time to the script. And the script site will be up by tomorrow evening, official message.

 

[Old Salt]

Great. Glad its the weekend as well, been real busy at work. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/me.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="me.gif" />

 

[DAS123]

Sorry all, i was in indianapolis all weekend, i will post the updated script this evening, unless a higher power causes the big storm on the way to knock out my power and make my computer temporarily unusable. (Hope not :S)

 

[gunsmith]

Ay Mercer.... ya'll put a curse on yar self. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="biggrin.gif" />

 

[DAS123]

<!--quoteo(post=242879:date=Mar 4 2008, 09:49 AM:name=gunsmith)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (gunsmith @ Mar 4 2008, 09:49 AM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=242879"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->Ay Mercer.... ya'll put a curse on yar self. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="biggrin.gif" /><!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
Speak of the Devil, it did go out. NOOOO!! LOL! Just for about an hour thats all.

Okay, there are just a few more lines that need be added to the script, but i will post it anyways for now just so we can get started again...



PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN: HOIST THE COLOURS


FADE IN:


EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY

CAMERA PANS ALONG A BEAUTIFUL ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE FOLLOWING
THE ROAD TO LONDON.

MUSIC: Becketts theme, Harpsichord with many flourishes,
strings, and light brass accompaniment.


EXT. LONDON WATER FRONT, EITC HQ - DAY

Town where a carriage is rushing through the streets.
Carriage interior-The occupant is a naval officer in the
uniform of the EITC holding a letter in his hand.

The carriage arrives amid the bustle of the busy docks. Huge
multi story warehouses sit back from the waterfront, porters
scurry around pulling hand carts laden with goods. A dirty,
noisy place with an unpleasant smell.

Music: Simple Harpsichord of Becketts theme.


MERCER
(CARRIAGE DOOR IS
OPENED)
Post Captain Nathaniel Edwards?



NATHANIEL
(STEPPING OUT OF
CARRIAGE HOLDING
A HANKERCHIEF TO
HIS NOSE)
Yes, and you must be Mr. Mercer.
My instructions said I would be
met on arrival.



MERCER
Leather, Sir.



NATHANIEL
What?



MERCER
(NOTING THE
HANKERCHIEF)
Leather, the smell. The tanners
are bringing in a shipment of
leather.





2.



NATHANIEL
I can't wait to get out to sea,
away from this place.



MERCER
(NOT THE SLIGHTEST
CHANGE IN
EXPRESSION)
Don't worry, you will be put to
work soon enough. Lord Beckett is
a busy man, we must hurry. Leave
your chest there, I will have it
collected.



NATHANIEL
Lead the way Mr Mercer.


MERCER AND NATHANIEL WALK INTO BUILDING.


INT. BECKETTS OFFICE - DAY

GUARDS OPEN DOORS. MERCER AND NATHANIEL ENTER. NATHANIEL
POLITELY REMOVES HAT.


BECKETT
(SMILES)
Ah, Post Captain Edwards, I am
glad you made it safely.


BECKETT OFFERS GLASS OF BRANDY TO NATHANIEL. MERCER LEAVES
ROOM.


NATHANIEL
(POLITELY)
Thank you Lord Beckett.


NATHANIEL ACCEPTS BRANDY.


BECKETT
I had you brought here to discuss
your first assignment.



NATHANIEL
Yes, sir.



BECKETT
I have a shipment, one of great
importance that needs
to be collected.




3.



NATHANIEL
Yes Sir. Which ship shall I be
taking?



BECKETT
Ah!.. Not quite, that simple I'm
afraid Capt Edwards.
(AS IF TALKING TO
NOBODY)
Is it?



MERCER
No, sir. I am afraid not.


NATHANIEL IS STARTLED BY MERCER'S APPEARANCE.


MERCER
(WALKS INTO SHOT)
There is a troublesome issue that
must be addressed. A captain, who
it repeatedly tardy with his
shipments.



BECKETT
This is having a detrimental
effect on my business, and you,
Captain Edwards, are going to be
part of the solution.



NATHANIEL
(NERVOUSLY)
Of course Sir. How can I help?



BECKETT
I am entrusting you with ensuring
that the next shipment proceeds on
schedule.You will accompany the
Captain on his next voyage and if
at any stage you are unhappy with
progress, you Captain Edwards, are
to take command.



NATHANIEL
(NERVOUSLY)
Take over the ship Sir? How will
the crew react to that?



BECKETT
That should not concern you Capt.
Mr Mercer will be joining you on
the ship he will assume
responsibility for the…….. morale
of the crew.


4.


MERCER HAS A SLIGHT SMILE ON HIS FACE AS HE HANDS OVER A
PACKAGE.


BECKETT
(Smiles)
Your instructions Captain and the
route. You are to be responsible
for the navigation. Thank you Post
Captain that will be all.


EDWARDS BOWS HIS HEAD, TURNS AND WALKS OUT OF THE ROOM.


BECKETT
(TO NO ONE, MERCER
IS IN THE
BACKGROUND)
Where is that damnable man! Mr.
Mercer go to the dock and make
sure everything is ready for our
guests arrival.



EXT. WICKED WENCH SAILING ALONG THE ENGLISH COAST - DAY

YOU SEE A SILLHOUETTE OF A SHIP REMARKABLY SIMILAR TO THE
BLACK PEARL. THE CAMERA PANS ALONG THE SIDE OF THE SHIP. AND
UP INTO THE RIGGING WHERE AN EITC FLAG IS FLYING.


SAILOR
(FROM UP IN THE
YARDS)
Pilot ho!



FIRSTMATE
Raise the signal to the pilot,
half sheet if you would, drop some
speed off her or this chap'll have
trouble getting aboard. Can't have
a mess up like last time. I'll
inform the Captain.


THE CAMERA PANS DOWN BEHIND THE SHIP WHERE THE WORDS "WICKED
WENCH" ARE. THE CAPTAINS BACK CAN BE SEEN THROUGH THE
WINDOWS, HE IS SITTING AT HIS TABLE, A NEAT PONYTAIL AND AN
IMMACULATE UNIFORM. A HAT, BOTTLE AND A GOBLET SIT IN FRONT
OF HIM. CAMERA MOVES INTO CABIN BEHIND THE CAPTAINS
SHOULDER. THERE IS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR, AND THE FIRSTMATE
ENTERS.


FIRSTMATE
Captain, Thames ho, High tide on
the hour, Pilot has been summoned,
half sheet set.




5.


EXT. EITC WATERFRONT DOCKS - DAY

WENCH IS TIED UP AND GANGWAY IS LOWERED. SPARROW WALKS OFF.
YOU SEE HIM FOR THE FIRST TIME WITH A TIDY EITC UNIFORM ON.
AS HE STEPS OFF THE GANGPLANK MERCER STANDS WITH 10 EITC
GUARDS, BARRING HIS PATH.


MERCER
Curious, I was sure Lord Beckett
ordered the shipment to arrive 2
weeks ago, but you have only just
arrived. Why so late?



JACK
A man is never late, just not
early.



MERCER
(Scoffs)



JACK
Oh, I thought my orders said to
have it here two weeks from two
weeks ago.



MERCER
(His grim
expression never
changes)



JACK
(Smiling uneasily)
Actually I was stopped by
a...convoy of yours to...inspect
my ship.



MERCER
Were you now.



JACK
...Yep, thats how it happened. It
all a terrible misunderstanding
gents.



MERCER
Lord Beckett is growing impatient.
Your commission might hang in the
balance.



JACK
(Is visibly stung
by hearing the
comment)
My commission? Lord Beckett cannot
(MORE)


6.



JACK (cont'd)
afford to lose a captain with my
sailing experience...you're
bluffing.



MERCER
We'll see. Lord Beckett still
wishes to see you.



JACK
I'm here aren't I?



MERCER
Never when you are expected
though.


MERCERS TESTED PATIENCE AT AN END, HE BRINGS OUT HIS PISTOL
AND NODS TO THE GUARDS WHO SEIZE SPARROW AND CARRY HIM OFF
TO BECKETTS OFFICE.


INT. BECKETTS OFFICE - DAY

Sparrow is escorted in with Mercer entering from behind.


BECKETT
(Looking out a
window)
Mr. Sparrow...



JACK
(Slightly Insulted)
Captain...Captain Sparrow.



BECKETT
It remains to be determined if you
are still able to rate that rank,
Mr. Sparrow. For now I am just
glad you were able to find your
way here.



JACK
I had a little help.
(Glances Nervously
at Mercer)



BECKETT
Maybe that's all one needs; a
little help.
(Turning around)
So, I find yet another shipment is
late as are you.


7.



JACK
A man is never late...'e's just
not early.



BECKETT
Is that so? Well seeing that you
are never early which could
possibly mean that you are never
on time then why should I still
employ you?



JACK
(Astonished)
Because! I'm Captain Jack Sparrow.



BECKETT
(Quickly)
For the moment you are.



JACK
What's that supposed to mean?



BECKETT
(Looking sternly
at Jack)
The Wench can sail with or without
you at the helm.



JACK
(Quick, and
desperate)
But I'm the only one who can coax
the speed out of her sails.



BECKETT
Oh, yes, how could I have
forgotten. I am getting terrible
at forgetting things, but there is
something despite that, which I
have not forgotten.



JACK
(Obviously
uncomfortable)
What's that then, eh?



BECKETT
(Emphatically)
That being a mission for you, one
last chance to redeem yourself as
it were.


8.



JACK
(Smiles weakly)



BECKETT
Are you up to the task, captain?
(pauses for
emphasis)
Or will you let me down again Mr.
Sparrow?



JACK
(The dropping of
his title at the
end of Beckett's
line not lost in
him, he replies
quickly)
Always up to not letting you down.



BECKETT
Good. Good.
(Begins pouring
Brandy for
Sparrow)
Then I hope you will prove to me
that I entrusted this assignment
to the right man.



JACK
(Feeling better
about the
situation)
Ah, proving oneself, 'tis the act
of showing another that he can do
things right...
(Grabbs a goblet
containing Brandy)
...with the proper compensation.
In doing things right he therefore
shows the other that he has in
fact been proven. Eh?
(Empties goblet)



BECKETT
Why of course Captain, it is just
good buisness.



JACK
(Pouring another
cup of brandy)
Were I in a busy mood, what then
might i busy myself with?



9.



BECKETT
There is a shipment of great
importance to the East India
Trading Company, and me. I cannot
discuss the contents, but you will
see when you get there. Mercer and
another individual: Post Captain
Edwards will accompany you on this
endevour to ensure its speedy
transport.



JACK
(Chokes on brandy
after hearing of
Mercers job)
Well, we...I. Thats perfect I will
ensure that no one is disappointed
at all, saavy?



BECKETT
(Nods)



JACK
(Slyly)
I am going to meed ammunition for
my ship, and some extra comforts
to help the long voyage go easily,
savvy?
(Glances at a
barrel of rum in
the corner)



BECKETT
You will have the ammunition and
what ever else it is that
satisfies you.



JACK
(Smiling. Replies
quickly while
turned to Mercer
and pointing at
Beckett with both
hands)
Good man!



BECKETT
(Sniffs)



JACK
Perfect we will set sail as soon
as the rum is loaded.
(Realizing his
mistake to say
(MORE)



10.



JACK (cont'd)
rum, he quickly
replies)
along with the ammunition.



BECKETT
Good, Mercer and Edwards will be
with you shortly.



JACK
(Smiling
disarmingly)
Thank you kind sir.


Sparrow walks out of the room. Mercer remained, unmoving.


BECKETT
(Waiting for the
doors to close)
Mr. Mercer, I am under the
impression that you will assure
that the cargo will arrive INTACT
and on time, with or
without...dissident crew members.



MERCER
Yes, sir.



BECKETT
Be warned, I suspect that some of
our competition may plan to take
the competition up a notch. There
is a squadron located to the south
of your destination, you may use
your discretion to signal on them
if you need the assistance.



MERCER
(Nods)
And if Sparrow has a problem with
transporting the cargo?



BECKETT
(Sipping brandy
while looking out
the window at the
docks)
Use your imagination.



MERCER
(A slight smile on
his lips)
Yes, sir.

11.


EXT. EITC WATERFRONT DOCKS - DAY

JACK WALKS PROUDLY ALONG THE DOCKS, EYING THE OCCASIONAL
WOMAN, WHEN HE SEES THE CARGO BEING LOADED ONTO THE WENCH HE
ABRUPTLY STOPS.


JACK
(Flailing hands
all about while
running)
Oi! Oi! Hold on there gents! Wait!


JACK STOPS AT A CRATE BEING CARRIED BY TWO CREW MEMBERS.


JACK
Open the crate please, this is the
captains cargo inspection.


CREW DO AS BIDDEN. JACK GRABS A BOTTLE OUT OF THE CRATE.


JACK
(GULPING SOME OF
THE RUM)
Very well done gents, carry on.


THE CREW MEMBERS LOOK STUPIDLY AT JACK FOR A COUPLE OF
SECONDS, SHRUG THEIR SHOULDERS, AND CARRY ON LOADING.


MERCER
(Startling Jack)
Mr. Sparrow, I would like to be
underway as soon as time permits.



JACK
(Arrogantly)
Ahem, my name is "Captain" Jack
Sparrow...savvy?


MERCER TURNS QUICKLY AND WALKS OFF DECK. JACK BOARDS THE
WENCH.


NATHANIEL
(Warmly)
Hello, Captain are all things
ship-shape?



JACK
(Watching the last
crate of rum
being loaded)
Yep, pretty much.
(Yells)
All hands! Raise anchor! Cast off
the lines. You know Oi! Oi! Oi!
(MORE)


12.



JACK (cont'd)
and the lot.


Ship is set off to sea, Jack being too worried about his
precious rum, fails to notice a large number of ships being
readied for another mission of Becketts...


EXT. MAIN DECK, WICKED WENCH. (DUSK) - NIGHT

Sparrow stands at the wheel enjoying the breeze of the
evening.


JACK
Mr. Wilsson, I think we owe our
guests a good hearty,
strong...ummm...magnificent meal,
so...step to.



WILSSON
(Annoyed)
Yes, Captain.


SPARROW STANDS THERE TO WATCH THE FINAL RAYS OF SUNLIGHT
SLINK BENEATH THE HORIZON. HE TURNS WHEN A QUICK GREEN FLASH
LIGHTS THE AREA FOR JUST A SECOND. SPARROW TURNS QUICKLY,
BUT SEES NOTHING.

CAMERA PANS TO SHOW THE SHIP SAILING OFF INTO THE DARKNESS,
STERN LANTERNS ALIGHT.


WILSSON
(Poking head out
from door)
Captain, dinner is served.



JACK
Good, invite Mr. Edwards and his
villainous watchdog to dinner.


WILSSON NODS HEAD IN QUICK SALUTE, THEN SCURRIES OFF.


INT. WICKED WENCH, CAPTAINS CABIN - NIGHT

SPARROW AND RANKING OFFICERS ARE SEATED AT THE HEAD OF THE
TABLE AS MERCER AND EDWARDS ENTER.


JACK
Glad you all made it safely.


SHOWS EVERYONE EATING THROUGH THE STERN WINDOWS.

13.



NATHANIEL
So, Captain Sparrow do you enjoy
your journeys?



JACK
Utter enjoyment mate.
(Clearly trying to
make sure Mercer
hears)
I always stick to my duties of the
EITC. There was never a deviation
from my orders at anytime in me
career.



MERCER
(Picks at food and
sets down fork,
looking at Jack)
Never a deviation from YOUR orders
maybe Mr. Sparrow, but orders
given by others.



JACK
(Squints his eyes
at Mercer)
I thought we were past all of this
mate.



MERCER
Past it?
(Swallows his rage
with a piece of
meat and glares
at Jack)
Maybe you are past it, but the
EITC has suffered loss from your
untimeliness



JACK
I am terribly sorry, if there are
any delays to be had on this
mission I shall inform you
immediately. On a higher note, why
are you on this mission Mr.
Mercer?


MERCER SUDDENLY BEGINS CHOKING. BEFORE ANYONE CAN REACT HE
POUNDS HIMSELF ON THE CHEST AND SPITS OUT A CHUNK OF MEAT.
THE OTHERS STARE AT HIM. MERCER SEEMS NOT TO NOTICE THEIR
ASTONISHED LOOKS.

14.



JACK
(Staring at Mercer
in utter
disbelief)
Under orders not to choke?



MERCER
(Shakes his head
and looks down,
picking up fork
again)
Just remember the deadline this
time, that is of higher
importance.



JACK
(Still in a bit of
shock over what
he just
witnessed, he
smiles weakly at
Mercer)
See, there comes a moment when
things are of the importance, but
on the lower-side of said
importance, and a moment where
there is a loftier side of the
importance. I would probably rank
this importance at about
upper-lower side, or lower-lofty
side of importance, but seeing
that you think it is a bit
important i will rank it
mid-lower-lofty importance on my
absolutely...strung out chart of
importance.


STIFLED LAUGHTER CAN BE HEARD AMONGST THE OFFICERS.


MERCER
(Confused)
Mid-lower-lofty side?



JACK
(Quickly and
intelligently)
Or mid-upper-lower side if you
would. Possibly a tad lower than
the median of the mid-upper-lower
side, savvy?

15.


ALL THE CREW, UNABLE TO CONTAIN THEMSELVES ANYMORE BREAK OUT
LAUGHING. EVEN EDWARDS LAUGHS. MERCER LOOKS AT HIS PLATE IN
SHAME AND ANGER.


MERCER
I don't think it is funny, Mr.
Sparrow.
(The Crew stops
laughing when
they see the cold
anger in the eyes
of Mercer)
Keep in your consideration why you
are on this trip, and what would
happen if you fail. Good evening,
gentlemen.



JACK
(Uneasy about
Mercers speech.
He looks up at
the officers.)
We should change the subject.



EXT. QUARTER DECK OF THE WICKED WENCH - NIGHT

JACK LEANS ON THE RAILING LOOKING ACROSS THE MOONLIGHT
SPATTERED SEA. EDWARDS IS WORKING ON A POSITION FIX USING A
SEXTANT


JACK
So how do you like sailing at sea?



NATHANIEL
(Continuing with
his sextant)
Ah, the sea; always changing,
never contained.



JACK
That, my friend is the definition
of freedom. I am a man of the
sea...of freedom.



NATHANIEL
(Drops what he is
doing)
You seem to care much for your
freedom.



JACK
That I do.



16.



NATHANIEL
(Earnestly)
This ship does not belong to
Beckett, does she? She's your own
ship, right? Then why are you not
off on your own?



JACK
You know, I have absolutely no
idea.



NATHANIEL
You long to be free, as do we all.
But we are all pawns in the
greater chess game.



JACK
Pawns? Trifles. I would be a
Knight in this chess game, because
Beckett doesn't understand how
much he will lose if he removes
me.



NATHANIEL
I'm afraid Lord Beckett knows
exactly what he will lose by
removing you...nothing. You are a
good man, Jack. Just a little
misguided.



JACK
Misguided? On this mission? More
like misinformed. I hardly know
what this is all about.



NATHANIEL
(Quietly)
Neither do I. But do be careful.
There seems to be more at stake
than you realize. Mercer is not
here for nothing.



JACK
Always a lack of information. Why?



MERCER
Lord Beckett knows the value of
information.



JACK
(Surprised)
Shouldn't you be in bed by now?




17.



MERCER
I get that often. Usually it is
that individual's last words. I
hope they won't be yours.



EXT. WICKED WENCH IN THE ATLANTIC - DAY

THE SHIP IS SAILING ALONG WHEN SMOKE IS SEEN IN THE
DISTANCE, AND A SHIP IS SEEN ANCHORED WITH A LARGE EITC FLAG
WAVING IN THE WIND. THE WENCH APPROACHES, AND MERCER MAKES
SURE JACK RUNS UP THE COLORS. A SMOKING WRECK OF A PIRATE
BRIG IS SLOWLY SINKING BENEATH THE WAVES. CREW FROM THE EITC
SHIP ARE ALL OUT IN THE WATER IN BOATS.


JACK
What in the devil happened here?



MERCER
Pirates. Scum. Its a good riddance
with less of them in this world.



JACK
(His eyes
transfixed on a
pirate flag
floating in the
water.)
Pirates? There's no proof of that.



MERCER
(Annoyed)
You're staring right at their
flag. Now quit lolly gaging and
run out the boats.



JACK
(Mutters)
I ought to gag you.
(Shouting)
Alright chaps, run out the little
dingies and assist our friends out
in their little dingies, savvy?


THE BOATS ARE LOWERED AND THE CREWS ROW OUT TO THE WRECK.
THEY SEARCH FOR A WHILE POKING BODIES WITH OARS TO SEE IF
ANY LIVE.


MERCER
(Shouting, Clearly
impatient)
I want every marine in a boat to
shoot every floating corpse to
(MORE)




18.



MERCER (cont'd)
make sure they're dead.


THE MARINES SHOOT THE BODIES, MOST ARE ALREADY DEAD, BUT
SOME START SCREAMING AND SWIMMING FRANTICALLY AWAY UPON
HEARING THE ORDER, THEY ARE CUT DOWN.


JACK
(Severe look of
stress on his
face. He
obviously feels
sorry for the
pirates.)



NATHANIEL
(ALSO AFFECTED BY
THE RUTHLESS
KILLING. HAS A
LOOK OF CONCERN
ON HIS FACE.)
Better to die by a bullet, then by
perishing at sea. Sharks, hunger,
thirst a painful death for them.



JACK
Yes, of course.


CAMERA PANS TO SUNSET.



FADE OUT.

 

[gunsmith]

I love it!

 

[Old Salt]

Thanks for updating the script, Mercer. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/me.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="me.gif" /> Now we should start adding in some of the ideas we came up with in this thread into the script. As soon as I can I will comb back through the thread try to fit one in.

 

[Pieter Boelen]

Thanks Mercer. I updated the script on my site now as well. See <a href="http://s31clan.com/privateftps/pietersmods/others/potc_hoist_the_colours.htm" target="_blank">here</a>. I'll read and submit my improvements later. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/doff.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="doff.gif" />

 

[DAS123]

Well, lets get this show on the road. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="smile.gif" /> <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/keith.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="keith.gif" />