@Levis
Attached find the revised file. I deleted the negative sign, used the money part of the dialogue for a new purpose, and edited pretty much every bit of dialogue in there (probably 50 lines). Aside from fixing the grammatical mistakes, I rewrote over half of it, trying to stick close to the meaning of the original version (while completely changing the words). Here is one example from the challenge a captain dialogue sequence:
Old version, without any changes from me:
"Yes, i'm the captain of a good ship ! You can see her in the port and I serve the crown of this colony.";
"Your governor will see your body hanged on my mast from the shore ! I'll wait you on sea captain ! Farewell !";
"I'm a corsar of the king and i accept your challenge mister ! You'll regret what you said.";
"Ha ! I'll sink you with pleasure !";
My rewritten version:
"I am an honest captain and loyal to my country. Consider your actions carefully, rogue.";
"Your country is fit only for the service of dogs such as yourself. Your ship will be mine, and your governor will witness your failure.";
"I serve my king through the strength of my cannons and crew. You will die for your insolence.";
"The dog bares its teeth. Soon, it will lie on its back.";
I have installed the file and tested several of the dialogues, and the ones I encountered all look good. I also used winmerge to double check I hadn't messed anything up, and it looks ok.
Also, tested, with removing the negative sign, the relations points from turning over contraband now works. I went from -45 to -42 from giving them about 20 each of three smuggled goods (or about 60 goods total).